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wtorek, 10 grudnia 2013

A post...

Hello, new post today. I have created a poem entitled I

I
When I get out 
from the very first place of mine
when?!
I can't wait
and yet I know not what outside is
I miss it
I miss the unknown

Well, the very short poem, or just a short poem shall I say. In fact there is more of it. But I decided to divide that one for three parts. What's more I have a question, can I write: and yet I know not what outside is or would it be better to change it for and yet I know not what is outside? Does anyone now? Hope you all enjoy this. 



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